My 3rd lyrics

Sun, Sep 12, 2010 at 6:01 PM

I made this song in a short period of time, so I don't know if there's english mistakes and all... And that ain't 100% done, so if you have some tips tell me please : )

Another dead man - LKZ

Now take a look at my life
Now tell me who the fuck are you for tellin me what's wrong or right?
I do what my mind thinks that's correct
I chose to live this life, and once you in there's no way back
Mums used to be a crack addicted, but now she's dead
Owed so many rocks to the drug dealer that he filled her up with lead
Poppa was a coward, wasn't there, and I don't even care
That ain't my problem if he wasn't man enough fo raisin me
So now I got steel and drugs cuz I got rents to pay
You know your salary? I get it all in only one day
Bitches are gettin around me, they wanna live life with a thug
Even rich peoples daughters are here lookin for some outlaw fuck
That's everybodies dream! Money and fancy cars
This life of crime makes me have everything I want in my block
Screw your face on me and you'll be dead befo you apologize
Hollow points inside your head, your family won't see you tonight
My name means danger, I grab a nine, makin bitches duck
And pull the trigger if you dunno how to keep your mouth shut
bang bang, I'm another thug, senseless killing
My life facts, mix'em with weed, so now you know why I ain't got feelings
But all good things don't last, suddenly it becomes a nightmare
Mo money mo problems, my own homies start hatin on me
But I don't care, gotta go on, I ain't gonn back down
Even though I don't live long enough I ain't no busta, can't quit it now

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All I wanted was good thangs for me, to live a wealthy life
Now everything left for me is a casket and my body is inside
I wanted to change, I'm sure this wouldn't be my end
But I wouldn't get this paper, so you know, I can't fight
against the lust, it keeps pullin me back
I couldn't take it, beein just another one, so i gotta grab the strap
again, the cicle never changes, shit just starts again
But I realized this too much late, now I'm just another dead man
I'm just another dead man

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Look at me, got fancy clothes and fancy cars
That's the only way of forgetin the scars of this war
My homies ain't the same, since the day we started sellin rocks
Everyday there was different brother lyin on chalk
I got everything you want, look at my ices
But take a trip deep into my heart, I'm all empty inside
Gotta go outside, smoke some weed so I can forget
The problems of this life, shall I get my gun? Nah, fuck that
As I steped outta my home I realized I made a bad choice
I hear someone screamin "die", wait a sec, I know this voice
Now what's that? My own homies shot my back
Those who I used to trust has just busted me with my own Mac
I'm fallin, my chest hits the floor
I turn my body to the sky trynna look at the stars, cause I won't see it no more
My shirt is gettin wet and red
And suddenly I'm back to my youth, my life starts to flash
I see didn't have no mom or dad, but I could follow another way
Could take all that anger and put shit on my brain
Not toxics, but knowledge, coulda go to school, become another type of man
But all i know is: If I could, I wouldn't do the same mistakes again
Maybe this was just my fate
I'd like to get back to past, but my mind woke up too late
They killed me, but there'll be another thug in my place
Walkin exactly the same road, destinated to the same fate

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All I wanted was good thangs for me, livin a wealthy life
Now all I got is a casket, where my body's inside
I wanted to change, I'm sure this wouldn't be my end
But I wouldn't get this paper, so you know, I can't fight
against the lust, it keeps pullin me back
I couldn't take it, beein just another one, so i gotta grab the strap
again, the cicle never changes, shit just starts again
But I realized this too much late, now I'm just another dead man
I'm just another dead man

Replies to This Posting

  1. Re: My 3rd lyrics

    Mon, Sep 13, 2010 at 4:54 AM

    Bullshit

  2. Re: My 3rd lyrics

    Mon, Sep 13, 2010 at 5:44 AM

    It looks good but you know the most important ain't thr lyrics but the flow , if you got a good flow you can't say anything nobody cares.
    See Soulja Boy Gucci Mane...............
    (I can't tellein you it's good or bad cause i'm European.....)

  3. Re: My 3rd lyrics

    Mon, Sep 13, 2010 at 6:20 AM

    that's some reality check right there...street lyrics
    if there are any mistakes it doesn't matter man....those are details
    i wonder how they sound on a beat
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  4. Re: My 3rd lyrics

    Mon, Sep 13, 2010 at 6:38 AM

    Ca$hOnly wrote:
    that's some reality check right there...street lyrics
    if there are any mistakes it doesn't matter man....those are details
    i wonder how they sound on a beat
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    I second that