Start here/this is the first real one.

Mon, Feb 8, 2010 at 4:07 AM By: steve0775

Finally,I have been waiting a long time!
Are you really, going to hear me now?
Awe, Now I can start back, believeing.
I really did not want to before.
Dont worry, I did not either.
For You, Finally are, are the one.
I have waited so long for.

Hold on, Hold on, HOld on! I need a second to think it all out.
Hold on, Hold on,Hold on! I have to think it out,

Now, I have been, all alone.
Alone! Alone! And alone!
And no, No! Not Even one, not you!
Even heard me, Nor did anyone,
Hear that my Heart, is beating!
My heart, My heart, has been,
awe so, so sore.
Angry I get! Just, thinking,
about giving it to You!

Don`t know, Don`t know, Don`t know?
How angry am I am I going to get.
Oh how do you even get?
All this out in the open?
I have, I have, I have, to say..
Got so much angrier every day.
Oh man, Oh man, am I finally,
going to unwind?

Hold on! Hold on! Hold on! Hold on
wait, just hold on for one minute.
give me just one more second.
I promise you! It will be quick.

How, do, we, do that?
Lets take a crack at it?
Just one more shot.
That is all? That is all!
That Is All!
I got one. well ok!
Just promise me!
Promise me, promise please, just this..

That you will, that you will,That you really listen to this.
That you will, that you will,That you Really Listen close.

So, will you? So will you? Be mad. O please?,
Please! I am begging! Please help me!!

Finally I do! I get only one chance with you?,
to get, to, get it all out, to you.
Do, Do not I really mean, anything, at all, to you?
So this is how what? we have to do this right now.
But you are, you are, you are going,
to, WHAT!?, you are going to Have to wait!
I know! It sucks! But, I am sorry!
I don`t know? Why excately. That is just,
how it always ends up.

Now, I am mad! Now, I am mad! Now ,I am very mad!
Now, I am awe kiinda sad, oh it is so sad!

I have to wait, to explain!
All because? We, just got done!
With? WHAT!? Just step one.Are you glad to hear this?
Bet that, you can not wait, for what? comes next.
Awe, just, breath. just breath, Please,Oplease for me?
Just breath and sigh. I swear someday, I will, come!
I will, come! I will come! I survived!
This far! At least till the day!
I can, make, you cry!
You did not know, I will have that power too.

  1. nil8r153 avatar

    On Thu, Mar 11, 2010 at 10:32 AM, nil8r153 said:

    I don't know why but it sounded like DMX in my head when i read it

  2. Mz. Blaque E. Diamond avatar

    On Mon, Feb 8, 2010 at 5:06 AM, Mz. Blaque E. Diamond said:

    guess powe ris wat u makeit. is this my rhyme? my time, your time, we understood sublime. sub- lemonoil to me means nothing with tha see i can t be talkin, walkin, stalkin what i aint to be. did u write wait? wait. why? i dont under stand - but if u do why not help i. no such thing as try - do. or dont. the rest is jus lip service-- who u kissin on?

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