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EVERYBODY GIMME COMMENT ( I can´t give you nothing only my thanks and respect ):
I need lil help because I tryin´write some lyrics and if it´ll be possible I wanna go to studio and record this shit but I´VE GOT BIG PROBLEM. Because I am not from USA or UK I can´t be sure my lyrics are correctly and I haven´t nobody who can tell me if it is right or not, if is it right way by which I wanna go.
I wrote here pair samples of lyrics and please gimme comments. I REALLY NEED IT cause I need to know: A) SHOULD I CONTINUE ??? Or are my lyrics only B) ONE BIG BULLSHIT AND I HAVE TO STOP RIGHT NOW :D. Please gimme comments, the more the better because I can´t make a decision without help. My future is in your hands.

SAMPLE 1. :
Guitarist take guitar,I take my words
Sometimes keen like sword, but open not curbed
Sometimes tender like silk breeze
No more silly and naive
How far reach my sphere
Everywhere, even though you crop out
Look the world is yours
Without range or confines
But way is too short
so move the fuck on, right .
day by day to another night
don´t be waiting on some sign
move ahead never look back
never mourn, it never help
don´t cry baby
it´s only bad nightmare
when you open eyes
you would see wonderful chance
to make a change
switch tempo in dance
never follow everything swallow
if you have than borrow
we all got purpose for who we gasp for
you know
open eyes and don´t be fool
when everything around is so fucking cruel
I relate you simply story without any rules
We got it all be on top or keep it down in poor
If you´re weak prepare for spiritual renewal
If you´re strong on top be aware cuz you could fall
It´s seems to be sometimes real hot or too cold
But never lay down arms it would be fault
It can seems to be hard but man be resource
Too many ways never be hopeless my dog
Your spirit is minster don´t let her tumble down, improve
whole life we live until to moment of truth
If you don´t fuck with´em they will fuck with you
Be too kindness nowadays when yall perjure ?
I mean it is irrational and could it be danger mortal
Care a damn about bon ton, I fuck what is proper

SAMPLE 2:
Just like when you´re very tired and want to sleep
Your feet are hurt you wanna driving a jeep
But way is too long and you haven´t many time to take a rest
And you haven´t any money so you can´t speed up your quest
Work so hard, all the time until will come times for chest
This slowly killing, you are softly, weak but mainly restless
Get away from this shit to nice world without cold winds
In the world where is all around sweat and prim
Without fucking bitches, scramble for Money and
Family affairs damage me inside but increasing my desire
It´s like want to sleep but just in finish, with hand hold fire
Like olympic winners on top off spire, with desire and bright fire
On 1 minute world with no liar, with peace inside of my heart
Feel of win yeaah homie this is my drug
Get away on small moment away from roguery
Yeeah it´s possible booy just believe in your dreams
Every hurdle will be invisible, no more fucking fiends
So get away, keep believe and you can get away

SAMPLE 3:
When I was going down the street and bitches saw me rollin´
Nobody can break me, enemy´s look was for me stolen
I´m not kinda of flossied up guy, noway chosen
I am what I am, ain´t nothning change, straight ballin
You know what I mean ? I don´t need to act I do it for real man
if you got problem with that motherfucker get damn
That´s all about my life not about fucked up money and fame
It´s all about my blood, my God all about what u´ve got in mind
All about my past, my present and this is why I´m hot
Man I tried to told ya I´m not like you you poser
I can be colder, I am holder, stronger than every other shelter
weapon of mass destruction so what stranger
You know I ma advancer but in this times worse than cancer
maybe only ungrasped, too fast for your heads yea
Bud I´ll be waitin´ boy I don´t Get mad at ya
I never wanna work like slave I´ve got my own thang
Dirty Money form the street but ain´t no gang
My shit, my deal that´s my own secret prank
My drops, my falls, my every day shit over there
So what, life is don´t fair, could be one bad nightmare
Maybe only for my mistakes but I really don´t care
I remember when I was small and how I stared
On thing what I want to got and now I got it oh my God.
I don´t tell I got everything I must keep it fight
I just tell you about my progression, evolution it´s fact
So start realize thing what u what to got
Than set teeth it´s don´t be easy but make it ruff
Never defend bastard evokes fear and panic rush
When they hate ya They hate your high put rung
Blindfold of your shine they think you´re smug
But fuck´em my homie they just counting change you round up
Everywhere I look everywhere I go I see nasty rot
jealous rat still follow you so keep it lock and loud
now yall know that´s my shit and I´am proud

THAT´S ALL, I´LL BE WAITING ON YOUR COMMENTS